Petals

Posted: February 14, 2013 in Poetry
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Upon entering her house, Jenny kicked off her heels and felt something was wrong; the lights were off. The lights were never off. She had them on a timer that turned them on every day when she got home at 7:00 p.m. She fumbled for the light switch and quickly discovered it wasn’t working. Jenny watched enough horror movies to know when the lights didn’t work she was gonna die. That’s when she heard it, the distance noise barely audible, but she recognized the song, moonlight sonata. Well, she thought, at least the killer knows me well.  She started to head towards the bedroom, why she didn’t know.

She took a step forward-crunch- her heart skipped a beat, and sweat started pouring down her face. She stopped and bent down to feel what she stepped on. She couldn’t see it, but she could smell it. Roses. No one knew she liked flowers… but Him… And he lived in Rhode Island, and she lived way out in California. Jeremy was finishing up his firefighter training, so he couldn’t be here… could he? She slowly made her way down the hall and stopped in front of the door, hand on the handle. The music was louder now. Could she do it? Open the door? Jenny took a deep breath and slowly turned the handle and opened the door.

When she opened the door she was completely taken back by the sight. She first noticed the candles that decorated the room which light up the floor and she saw the rose pedal pathway to the bed. She stepped into the room towards the bed and discovered their was a large pile of roses in the shape of a heart. Upon the pedal heart there was a note. She picked up the note and read it: “Turn around” She twirled around and saw him, Jeremy, down on one knee in a 3-piece suit, holding a ring. “Will you marry me?” he asked.

She rushed to him and dragged him to his feet and kissed him deeply. “Is that a yes?” he asked in his deep, calm voice that she longed to hear. Jenny couldn’t talk, she was speechless. She just nodded ‘yes’. He slipped on the ring and intertwined his fingers in hers. “But.. how? I mean” She started, but before she could finish his lips were upon her. Jeremy kissed her hard and deep. Jenny melted to his touch, she longed to be enclosed in his muscular arms. Almost as if reading her mind, Jeremy picked her up and gently placed her on her back on the bed. He caressed her dark brown hair behind her ears and brought her in for a deep passionate kiss. His mouth devoured her lips, she hissed and Jeremy slid his tongue into her mouth twirling it around hers.

Jeremy pulled away from the kiss and Jenny wanted more, much more than that. Already dripping wet for him she lunged after him and slid off his suit jacket. Taking him by the belt she made quick work of it and his jeans. Jeremy was hard, very hard. His cock bulging in his boxers, he longed to be in her capable hands. Jenny teased him and licked his length trough his boxers.

Jeremy groaned at Jenny’s touch. He needed her, he loosened his tie and unbuttoned his shirt and slid it off his broad shoulders, exposing his tattoo -he tightened the tie again knowing Jenny loved it- a dragon wrapped around his left side and came up across his chiseled chest and stopped on the right side of his neck. Jenny sat up and traced the tattoo. Jeremy took her face into his right hand; while the left slid around to her back and grabbed the zipper of her little black dress and slowly slid it down the curves of her body. When it came to a stop just above her perfectly round ass, he started sliding it down her body as he kissed her. Down past her shoulders revealing the sexy red lace bra she sported.

Jenny laid back, as she let Jeremy work her dress down past her ass and soaked matching red panties. Jeremy caressed up her slender alabaster legs coming to a rest on her soaked panties. He leaned over and licked along her dripping core. “That’s pay back little one.” he said as she gasped and was nearly sent over the edge. He bit her panties and skillfully slid them down her legs and off. He licked back up her legs and spread them wide as he reached her weeping sex.

Jenny could feel the heat of his breath on her pussy. She longed for him, she needed him. She looked down just in time to see Jeremy smile before sliding his tongue flat and evenly pressured along her lips. She arched her back and thrusted against his tongue inviting him to taste her more. He came up to her clit twirling it with his tongue. Jenny felt him take her clit into his mouth between his teeth. He teased it with his tongue before sliding two fingers deep into her brushing against that spot. She came instantly coating his fingers in her essence.

Jeremy slowly removed his fingers and licked them clean while Jenny watched. The taste and smell of her potent orgasm invigorated him. He needed to take her and now. He came up on her and teased the her with the tip of his throbbing erection. In record breaking time he found the latex in his suit pocket and covered his cock. And eased into her very slowly, inch by inch he tortured her by taking his time.

Jenny felt his hard cock stretch her as he filled her. As he got as deep as he could, he quickly slid all the way out then thrusted back into her hard. She arched her back, moaning his name. Jeremy found his rhythm, thrusting deep and hard into her. With a slight adjustment, each thrust began to hit her G-spot, she screamed with pleasure, as she began to tighten around him. Groaning Jeremy pounded against her; they were both close. his rough hand found her clit, rubbing in circles the friction sent Jenny over the edge. She  gripped the bed as she tightened and came over his cock.

Her second orgasm was much harder and more intense than the first, causing Jeremy to nearly come undone. A few thrusts more he couldn’t hold it back any more and as quick as a flash, he pulled out, removed the condom, and sent his seed over her perky breasts. Jenny loved it and licked up his delicious load.

Jeremy collapsed next to Jenny and pulled her next to him, both breathless, Jenny managed to say “Um why didn’t my light turn on?” Jeremy grinned “Funny story about that…”

Comments
  1. Lori Martini says:

    Mmmmmmmmmmm that was intensely hot and so romantic. So full of passion, truly loved it! Left me wanting more, much more 😉 xo

  2. Meri says:

    Wow! Love it! Very seductive, passionate & steamy hot! I will have to admit I got little teary at the proposal.

  3. gelytayz says:

    Wow Great! What a way to end up my day.;)

    Keep writing lover boy.

    x gel

  4. Very arousing! Loved the build up and the romantic proposal that moved believably into the very hot sex! The need and urgency of the lovers was well portrayed. Good work and very well written!

  5. sensual eroticism with heart melting romance. well done, sweets. x

  6. Sweet AND sexy…just like you! I loved it! X

  7. Love this! Hot, steamy & romantic!!

  8. Meri says:

    It has little mystery, suspense, romance, desire, & lust. When you read it, you can visualize what is written. The reader can feel the characters & get absorbed in the story.

  9. gemini says:

    imaginative and sexy.. thank you 🙂

  10. A lot of steam here Brandon, erotic and filled with imagination and lust…

  11. chaseboehner says:

    Touching and intimate. Feels like a real couple with an incredible future!!! Her need fuels his desire and his love envelops her need and nurses it to bursting! 🙂

  12. lisa298 says:

    Wow Brandon, I loved this. It’s starts mysterious – then hearts, flowers and love before blowing us away with passion and lust. The last line for me is true love, the mundane funny line that brings a smile to the eyes. I loved very line of this xxxx

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